Thursday, November 26, 2009

November peem

Nice
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Very clost to Christmas
Exciting
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Busy
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Saturday, October 31, 2009

My Halloween Costume

Tonight I will be dressed up for Halloween. My costume is called Teal Dragon. Sounds like a dragon costume right? Well maybe its a dragon and maybe it's not. In my poll guess what my costume is. ------------------------------------------->

Monday, October 5, 2009

My poll

I am surprised at how my poll if turning out. Only 1 love it and 7 yes! I quess I should change my blog a little. :( Plz tell me what I am doning wrong and what you want to see changed. My blog should be fan and entertaining but, I quess it just is not what you guys are looking for in a blog.

Sunday, October 4, 2009

GO PHILLIES!!!!

I like to watch baseball. My favorite baseball team is the Philidelpia Phillies. They rock! Last year they won the World Series. And now they are in the playoffs to get into the World Series. Go Phillies. last year I think I was their good luck charm because. When I wasn't thinking about them or watching when they where playing most of the time they lost. And when I was thinking about them or watching and they where playing most of the time they won. Now is that a good luck charm or what? My Nana loves the Phillies jsut like me.

What baseball team do you like?

Saturday, October 3, 2009

I need ideas

I was wondering if you have any ideas for me to write about. Right now I don't know what to write about. Please give me ideas. I am counting on you guys again. PLEASE HELP! Give we ideas by commenting.

My Softball Game

Last Friday (Friday October 2, 2009), I had a softball game. We won 4-3. I scored one of the points. I play at HGSA. It was suppose to be our 4th game but, it was our 3rd. The first game was canceled because it rained. :( We play 8 games altogether and we have a game every Friday.

Thursday, October 1, 2009

October Poem

spOoky
Creepy
Time for candy!
peOple running around
Buy your costume
Enjoy!
Really fun

I need your help again!

I need you guys help again. I was wondering if I should start a whole book with chapters, or just write different things. Please help me with this question. All of your comments on the last one where I needed help were tons of help so I am counting on you again.

Monday, September 28, 2009

The Nice Mummie

Once there was a nice mummy wondering the streets close to a graveyard. He had no idea where he was so to went up to a door and rang what he thought was a toy but really was a door bell and kept ringing it non-stop and he liked it. Until a woman answered a door with a stick and she looked pretty mad. Her face was turning dark red. The mummy knew what she was about to do so he ran across the street and did the same but, with a man but, the man wasn’t mad. He was actually pretty cool about it. He was fine with it because he was a little boy who loved mummies and always wanted one! So the boy took him inside told his mom and dad about how they meet and his parents said that he could keep him until they can find where he came from. They forgot about the graveyard and started putting flyers up about a found mummy.
When people saw the posters they came to their house to meet the mummy. Everyone was so interested. Then one day the guy that waters the flowers that people leave at the graveyard came to the house and said that there was a missing person. Then he thought about it and figured out that it was the mummy.
So the next day the mummy had to go back to where he belonged. He was very nice about the whole thing. He said good-bye to all of the neighbors and the family that let him stay at their house and said hello to the graveyard. After that day no one saw the nice mummy ever again.

Sunday, September 27, 2009

I need your help!!!!!

Hello all! I have a question for you! Do you think I should get help from my brother to write more of my story that I already have 2 chapters of? Or do you think I should start writing a different story? If I start a new story I will make it long and only 1 chapter, so it wouldn’t even be a chapter. I am think of doing the long thing but, I some of my body is telling me to get my brothers help. So instead of asking my family because I know what they would say I am asking you. I am counting on you. I will tell you the answer after I look at all of my comments and see if I want to have to think really hard about what to write or to get all of my brothers ideas and change it up a little. I need your help. Please help me decide. Tell me my commenting on this.

Breezee is back!

Sorry I haven’t written in a while my summer has was crazy (with watching T.V. so much lol)! Now that I am back at school and do writers workshop everyday. I will be writing a lot more to practice. I will try and do one story a week but, that might not work out as well as I am hoping because now I my week is packed! So I will post as much as I can. Post you soon!

Sunday, April 19, 2009

Chapter 2: Zeke

“Zach, are you ready to practice sword fighting yet? Is it because all of the things you need to get for practice are on different sides of the room? I will help you fix that after practice and school tomorrow,” stated Zeke. “Wait a minute Zeke. I am not as fast as you. And I am not as organized as you like you said. I will take your offer for you to help me get organized like you are. And since we are doing that can we do it to my whole room so I am ready for school on time also? It would be a big help,” answered Zach. “Sure buddy, I will happily help you organize your bedroom. And I will always help you organize things when you want help. You can also call me like the Sword Fighting Organizer if you want,” agreed Zeke. “Okay, Sword Fighting Organizer buddy,” Zach replied.
So after Zach was ready they went down to the sword room. They practiced for a bit and then they took a 30 minute break after they practiced their strong, cool sword fighting skills for 1 hour and a half. Zach and Zeke felt like it was 100 degrees out and they were playing softball all day long. When they got back to playing at the end Zeke was about to fake die and he just put up his arms up toward the sky and then toward Zach for fun and then wind was pushing Zach against the wall while Zeke still had his hands toward Zach and then finally put down his hand and took a run for it without his sword so Zach couldn’t yell at him and so he could figure out what happened.
When Zeke got to his room he locked the door and laid down on his bed and looked up at the ceiling for a bit and they got an idea of what could have had happen. Now he was very creative so his idea was that he had superpowers! When he first thought of it he was thinking that is was totally not what happened but, he realized that there was no other explanation and if he had super powers that means that his mom, dad, sister, and brother had to have powers too! And then he had to think about something else that would be a harder decision and that thing was to tell his family about it. So he took a few minutes to think about it and right was he came to a decision to not tell his family Zach was knocking on the bedroom door. Since the door was locked Zach couldn’t come in. But sooner or later his mom would come up and ask Zack what happened and then he would tell her and would ruin his plan to keep it a secret. So he had to answer the door so no one would find out and he wouldn’t have to go the doctor so his mom and dad could see if it going to affect his health and stuff like that. So he did answer it and Zach was saying, “What happened down there? If you held me up there any longer I could have died? How did you do it? It was really cool but dangerous!” “What and where? What are you talking about?” Zeke answered like he had no idea what he was talking about. He wanted to smile but then Zach would know he was lying so he kept the smile inside himself.
After Zach left Zeke’s bedroom confused, Zeke burst out laughing. He thought it was hilarious that he acted like he didn’t know what Zach was talking about. Then, he finally stopped laughing about 2 minutes after he started. His mom heard him laughing though and was wondering what was wrong. So when she got up to Zeke’s bedroom she knocked on his door and said, “Are you ok in there Zeke? I heard you laughing and I was wondering if you are okay.” “I am good Mom, I just saw something funny on T.V. that’s all.” Zeke replied calmly. After that, Zeke’s mom left. “Good thing I have a T.V. in my room or else I would have not known what to do.” Zeke quietly mumbled to himself as he happily lay down on his bed and he thought about how powerful his powers could be and how long he is going to keep this a secret from his family.

Thursday, April 16, 2009

Volume 1: Discovery Chapter 1: What?

Once, a long time ago on a planet named Zotopia there lived a family that had superpowers and didn’t know! In the family there are 2 parents and 3 kids, 2 sons and 1 daughter. The mom was named Tammy, the dad was named Ted, the 2 sons were named Zeke and Zach, and the daughter was named Elizabeth. All of the children were 10 years old and born on the same day so they were triplets.
So one day Zeke and Zach went outside to practice their sword fighting skills as they do every day because they were training to be the greatest sword fighters in the world. They didn’t get trainers because they wanted to save money because of the economy and because they could use their brother to help them. They also practice every day so they could hopefully reach their goal of being the greatest sword fighters in the world. They used play swords so they didn’t hurt each other. They didn’t want to die when they were only 10 years old. They couldn’t wait until the day that they would use real swords and kill people though. Zach and Zeke promised each other they would never fight each other because they are brothers and they didn’t want to hurt each other.
That day when Zeke and Zach were practicing there was a sudden wind. Zach didn’t feel anything and didn’t see anything blowing and Zeke didn’t say anything so they just went back to fighting. After the wind had passed they went back to sword fighting and Zeke nailed Zach right in the heart. It didn’t really hurt Zach but, since they like acting like it is a real fight and they had real sword he acted like it really hurt. And Zeke acted like he was evil and was Zach’s enemy, so he was happy. For the rest of the day they kept reminding each other about it.
Elizabeth was training to be one of the greatest kung-fu fighters in the world instead of trying to become one of the greatest sword fighters in the world because she didn’t want to get hurt and die in a sword fight. Every day at 3:00 in the afternoon she would meet her kung-fu trainer outside to practice.
So when Elizabeth got to the kung-fu room on the first day of the new level of kung-fu her trainer wasn’t there! So she went to tell her mom and dad that her trainer wasn’t on time. So when Elizabeth told her parents, Elizabeth’s dad said, “Oh, sorry. I forgot to tell you that she called out sick.” Of course Elizabeth was sad, but what could she do? She still wanted to practice so she just reviewed what she learned the day before.
And while the Elizabeth, Zeke, and Zach where practicing Tammy and Ted were playing tennis. When it was the half way point it was a tie. So they decided to stop when someone got a point. After 30 more minutes of playing Tammy decided to just call the half way break time. She was really hot. So she decided to go inside the house and get a cool drink. So she did. After she did she felt much better. Good thing they got a 30 minute break because it took 29 minutes to cool off from all the tennis playing before the half way point. So when they started playing again when Ted hit the ball Tammy totally missed it and then when Tammy hit it for the first time Ted totally missed the ball. The final score on for the game was very close it was 109-100. Tammy won the game and Ted sadly lost. He was very sad.

Wednesday, April 8, 2009

About my newspaper Brienne's News

Last Monday I made a newspaper at first I couldn't think of a name and then it "hit me." The name that I can Up with was Brienne's News. So that's what I decided to call it. The Next day (Monday)I brought my newspaper into school and gave it to my friends (only girls)that are in my class and that same day my friends (all girls also) from different classes asked for one! I was so surprised that they wanted a copy so badly Because Brienne's News was so popular I decided to make one every week for my "fans". So I made one today (Wednesday,April 8th,2009). I only gave it to the people I did gave my first one to. I think I am going to make Brienne's News for the rest of the school year.On the 1st Brienne's News I made I out in a story from Breezee tales and I made a paragraph about Breezee tales.

My Month Poem

A is for April shows bring May flowers
P is for Pretty flowers blooming
R is for Realizing the beauty of the Earth
I is for In everywhere we
L is for Look

Tuesday, March 10, 2009

The Pencil Story

Please don’t sharpen me! I don’t want to get any shorter! But I just kept getting sharpened. Don’t use me for a test. I don’t think I am that useful! No! I am almost as a marble now. Don’t throw me away ether! I will not do well in a vast garbage pile. Use the new pencil.
Sadly my owner didn’t hear me. Please I can’t miss my sleepover with my friend. Then, he stops writing. He was walking with me somewhere. 10 seconds later I knew where he was taking me. He was taking me to…to…to the garbage can! It was awful.
He stopped right when the teacher told him to. Don’t throw away that pencil. “It is still useful.” the teacher said. “What for?” my owner asked. “You’ll see” she answered. He handed me to her. I did’n know what I was going to be used for. She put me down on her desk.
Then, I fell asleep. I took a long nap. When I woke up I…I was glued to other pencils hanging on a wall. It was very weird. All the other pencils were almost as small as me. I asked the pencil next me and what we were hanging on the wall for and she said we are on the “Look how many pencils we used up so far” wall. “That explains it.” I answered. So my life will live much longer than it would if I was thrown away. But how much longer will I last?

Saturday, February 21, 2009

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My School Science Fair

Ahhh! 2 days ago I handed in my science fair project and I won’t know if I won until Tuesday. The judges aren’t judging them until Monday after school. I just want to know if I won or my sister won. It would be awesome if my sister and I both won. I won last year so I wouldn’t mind if my sister and I didn’t win or just if my sister won. But, this year if we win we go to another science fair and if we win that there is another science fair in Washington! So one science fair can lead to another science fair that can lead to another science fair!

Sunday, February 8, 2009

The New Girl in the School

Chapter 1

Once there was a little girl named Elizabeth. She just moved to New Jersey from Mississippi. She doesn’t know anyone. This is her first time moving and she just turned 10. So before school when she was waiting for the bus kids were talking to her to try and get to know her, but she didn’t listen.
So when she got to school a girl named Liz came up to her. “Hi. My name is Liz. Are you new?” Elizabeth just nodded. “I’m new here too. I am from Mississippi. Where are you from?” Liz asked. “Mississippi.” Elizabeth answered. “You talk! My friend said you never talked!” Elizabeth just walked away. Liz never saw Elizabeth the rest of the morning. Then, at lunch she saw her sitting alone at a table.
When Liz got to the table Elizabeth said “Can I please be alone right now?” So Liz just walked away. Then, Liz never saw Elizabeth for the rest of the day.

Saturday, January 31, 2009

The Secret Person

There is a little girl named Sarah. She is 11 years old. She also has no brother or sister. She lived with her mom and dad. She moved into her vast house about 1 year ago and she still never saw half of it. It was that big. It was a Saturday afternoon and she heard a voice going from the part of house she never saw. Her dad was a work and her mom was next door babysitting a baby named Joey. So it couldn’t be either of them.
“Where could it be?”Sarah heard. The voice sounded like someone she knew's voice. She thought and thought about who it could be, but no one was in mind. She wanted to see who it was but she didn’t know what could be on that side of her house. “Nothing weird,” she said to herself. So she went over to the closest hallway. And she heard the voice down that hallway! She looked in each room and saw no one in the rooms. When she got to the last door on the hallway she saw someone look thought the stuff in that room.
“Who are you?”Sarah asked. “It is just me Sarah.” the voice answered. Now, the voice sounded more like her moms. But it had a little higher pitch. “Mom is that you?” “Yes.” The voice answered. Sarah was so happy that it she wasn't a stranger. “Why aren’t you with Joey?” Sarah said. “Joey’s mom came home early because her boss thought she was working to hard. I am her because I am looking for my yoga mat.” she answered. ”It is right over there.” Sarah told her mom.
The End

One Sad Day

Ray Jackson was the greatest race car driver in his neighborhood. His very best friend is the leader of his pit crew: a good natured pony named Sam. Rocky and Sam won 17 races together.
The problem was the success was going to Ray’s head. He started to think that he was such a powerful superhero that he didn’t need Sam’s help anymore. This made Sam feel sad. Finally, Sam got so fed up he told Ray he couldn’t tie his shoes anymore. When it was time for the next race, Ray was confident that he could win the race without Sam. The starting buzzer sounded, and Ray took off with a big thump! By the final lap, he was far ahead of the other drivers. Suddenly, Ray heard a big exploding noise, and his racecar flipped over and came to a halt. He got out and saw that his front tire had come loose! Without Sam around to fix it, Ray had to resort to phoning his mom. All of the other cars whooshed past him, and he finished in dead last!
After the race Ray told Sam that he was the pit crew helper ever. They went back to being best friends… not to mention race car champions.
[from webkinz creations]

Friday, January 30, 2009

The Charm Forest

Once upon a time, deep in the Charm Forest, there lived a good fairy named Katie. She made her home inside of an old tree trunk, and she could talk to all of the plants in the forests. The plants were her best friends.
But one day, the forest was suddenly silent. Katie sang for two whole hours, but none of the plants answered her. Then she realized that the leaves on the trees were turning purple and there was a thin layer of frost on the ground. The plants were so quiet because the winter was coming!
Katie tried to get used to her friends not being around, but she was just so grumpy without them. So she decided to cast a spell. Picking up her star dust and reading from the Newspaper, Katie spread a group of pixies throughout the entire forest. All of a sudden, the forest disappeared, and the plants sprung back to life! They all said a big Hooray! to Katie.
And ever since then, no matter what time of year it is, the Charm Forest was always green and blooming.
[from webkinz creations]

My happy day

One day I was just learning and then the teacher just called me up to her desk. I didn’t know what she was calling me up for. She was just really going to tell me about a writing I wrote. It was my life time order essay. She thought it was really good. She even told me it was the best one in the class! I was the only one to get a 5 in the class. She even read it to the whole class! I was so surprised that she thought it was so good because I didn’t think it was that great. That brightened up my day. So I was really happy that day.

Wednesday, January 28, 2009

The Secret Key

Once there was a little girl named Liz. She was as small as an ironing board. So one day she was just walking down the sidewalk like a nice little girl and she found a key on the ground. So when she was about to pick it up to show her parents it was gone! It was gone in a flash. She ran home to get her parents. “One second a key was on the ground and the next it was gone!” she said in her small voice. Her parents asked her if anyone was nearby when it happened. The answer was yes. But when she was back outside no one was in sight. Then she thought she had no chance but to run around looking for that person.

“I remember what he looked like,” she told her parents. “Did you ever think that it was his key?” her mom asked. “No because I saw his keys in his pocket.” Liz answered. No one talked for two to five minutes. Liz told her mom that she was going to look for the man.

After she walked two block she saw the man! She ran the man and told him, “ Does that key belong to you? Because I see your keys in your pocket.” “No they don’t belong to me but they do belong to my wife,” he answered. “Sorry for all of the trouble I caused you,” she said. Then she walked away. “At least I solved that problem,” she said as she walked away.

The End

The Scary Castle

Once there was a little girl who saw a king-sized castle. Her name is Beth. She wanted to know what was inside. So she went inside. There were skeletons hanging everywhere. She tip-toed down the long hallway.


“Grr!” Beth heard. The sound came from down a hallway. When she got to a door she saw fire! She was very brave so she went inside the door and saw nothing! There was a huge door on the other side of the room. The door was almost burnt to a crisp!


“Grr!” she heard again. This time she was closer to the sound. She always had her journal with her so she wrote what the sound could be coming from. Her scariest idea was a dragon! She thought about it for a few minutes.


“Wow!”Beth said. She said wow because she opened the door a little and she saw a big eye! So she crossed out all of the small animals. The only thing left on the list was…a dragon! She opened the door the rest of the way. When she did she saw a real…dragon! She ran for her life out of the door. The dragon ran after her!


When she was out of the castle she locked the vast door shut. Finally she was safe.


The End