Thursday, April 16, 2009

Volume 1: Discovery Chapter 1: What?

Once, a long time ago on a planet named Zotopia there lived a family that had superpowers and didn’t know! In the family there are 2 parents and 3 kids, 2 sons and 1 daughter. The mom was named Tammy, the dad was named Ted, the 2 sons were named Zeke and Zach, and the daughter was named Elizabeth. All of the children were 10 years old and born on the same day so they were triplets.
So one day Zeke and Zach went outside to practice their sword fighting skills as they do every day because they were training to be the greatest sword fighters in the world. They didn’t get trainers because they wanted to save money because of the economy and because they could use their brother to help them. They also practice every day so they could hopefully reach their goal of being the greatest sword fighters in the world. They used play swords so they didn’t hurt each other. They didn’t want to die when they were only 10 years old. They couldn’t wait until the day that they would use real swords and kill people though. Zach and Zeke promised each other they would never fight each other because they are brothers and they didn’t want to hurt each other.
That day when Zeke and Zach were practicing there was a sudden wind. Zach didn’t feel anything and didn’t see anything blowing and Zeke didn’t say anything so they just went back to fighting. After the wind had passed they went back to sword fighting and Zeke nailed Zach right in the heart. It didn’t really hurt Zach but, since they like acting like it is a real fight and they had real sword he acted like it really hurt. And Zeke acted like he was evil and was Zach’s enemy, so he was happy. For the rest of the day they kept reminding each other about it.
Elizabeth was training to be one of the greatest kung-fu fighters in the world instead of trying to become one of the greatest sword fighters in the world because she didn’t want to get hurt and die in a sword fight. Every day at 3:00 in the afternoon she would meet her kung-fu trainer outside to practice.
So when Elizabeth got to the kung-fu room on the first day of the new level of kung-fu her trainer wasn’t there! So she went to tell her mom and dad that her trainer wasn’t on time. So when Elizabeth told her parents, Elizabeth’s dad said, “Oh, sorry. I forgot to tell you that she called out sick.” Of course Elizabeth was sad, but what could she do? She still wanted to practice so she just reviewed what she learned the day before.
And while the Elizabeth, Zeke, and Zach where practicing Tammy and Ted were playing tennis. When it was the half way point it was a tie. So they decided to stop when someone got a point. After 30 more minutes of playing Tammy decided to just call the half way break time. She was really hot. So she decided to go inside the house and get a cool drink. So she did. After she did she felt much better. Good thing they got a 30 minute break because it took 29 minutes to cool off from all the tennis playing before the half way point. So when they started playing again when Ted hit the ball Tammy totally missed it and then when Tammy hit it for the first time Ted totally missed the ball. The final score on for the game was very close it was 109-100. Tammy won the game and Ted sadly lost. He was very sad.

5 comments:

  1. Breezee what do you mean by they have super powers but they didnt figure them out at the end of the story or are you going to write another were you stoped?????

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  2. I like your story, keep writing!!!!!!! from S.H. :)

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  3. it was sooooooo awesome! i loved it. i hope u write more!!!!!!!!!!!
    from,
    ur #1 fan

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  4. who is my #1 fan? toulie or S.H. know?

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