November peem

Nice
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Very clost to Christmas
Exciting
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Busy
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My poll

I am surprised at how my poll if turning out. Only 1 love it and 7 yes! I quess I should change my blog a little. :( Plz tell me what I am doning wrong and what you want to see changed. My blog should be fan and entertaining but, I quess it just is not what you guys are looking for in a blog.

GO PHILLIES!!!!

I like to watch baseball. My favorite baseball team is the Philidelpia Phillies. They rock! Last year they won the World Series. And now they are in the playoffs to get into the World Series. Go Phillies. last year I think I was their good luck charm because. When I wasn't thinking about them or watching when they where playing most of the time they lost. And when I was thinking about them or watching and they where playing most of the time they won. Now is that a good luck charm or what? My Nana loves the Phillies jsut like me.

What baseball team do you like?

I need ideas

I was wondering if you have any ideas for me to write about. Right now I don't know what to write about. Please give me ideas. I am counting on you guys again. PLEASE HELP! Give we ideas by commenting.

My Softball Game

Last Friday (Friday October 2, 2009), I had a softball game. We won 4-3. I scored one of the points. I play at HGSA. It was suppose to be our 4th game but, it was our 3rd. The first game was canceled because it rained. :( We play 8 games altogether and we have a game every Friday.

October Poem

spOoky
Creepy
Time for candy!
peOple running around
Buy your costume
Enjoy!
Really fun

I need your help again!

I need you guys help again. I was wondering if I should start a whole book with chapters, or just write different things. Please help me with this question. All of your comments on the last one where I needed help were tons of help so I am counting on you again.

I need your help!!!!!

Hello all! I have a question for you! Do you think I should get help from my brother to write more of my story that I already have 2 chapters of? Or do you think I should start writing a different story? If I start a new story I will make it long and only 1 chapter, so it wouldn’t even be a chapter. I am think of doing the long thing but, I some of my body is telling me to get my brothers help. So instead of asking my family because I know what they would say I am asking you. I am counting on you. I will tell you the answer after I look at all of my comments and see if I want to have to think really hard about what to write or to get all of my brothers ideas and change it up a little. I need your help. Please help me decide. Tell me my commenting on this.

Breezee is back!

Sorry I haven’t written in a while my summer has was crazy (with watching T.V. so much lol)! Now that I am back at school and do writers workshop everyday. I will be writing a lot more to practice. I will try and do one story a week but, that might not work out as well as I am hoping because now I my week is packed! So I will post as much as I can. Post you soon!

About my newspaper Brienne's News

Last Monday I made a newspaper at first I couldn't think of a name and then it "hit me." The name that I can Up with was Brienne's News. So that's what I decided to call it. The Next day (Monday)I brought my newspaper into school and gave it to my friends (only girls)that are in my class and that same day my friends (all girls also) from different classes asked for one! I was so surprised that they wanted a copy so badly Because Brienne's News was so popular I decided to make one every week for my "fans". So I made one today (Wednesday,April 8th,2009). I only gave it to the people I did gave my first one to. I think I am going to make Brienne's News for the rest of the school year.On the 1st Brienne's News I made I out in a story from Breezee tales and I made a paragraph about Breezee tales.

My Month Poem

A is for April shows bring May flowers
P is for Pretty flowers blooming
R is for Realizing the beauty of the Earth
I is for In everywhere we
L is for Look

The Pencil Story

Please don’t sharpen me! I don’t want to get any shorter! But I just kept getting sharpened. Don’t use me for a test. I don’t think I am that useful! No! I am almost as a marble now. Don’t throw me away ether! I will not do well in a vast garbage pile. Use the new pencil.
Sadly my owner didn’t hear me. Please I can’t miss my sleepover with my friend. Then, he stops writing. He was walking with me somewhere. 10 seconds later I knew where he was taking me. He was taking me to…to…to the garbage can! It was awful.
He stopped right when the teacher told him to. Don’t throw away that pencil. “It is still useful.” the teacher said. “What for?” my owner asked. “You’ll see” she answered. He handed me to her. I did’n know what I was going to be used for. She put me down on her desk.
Then, I fell asleep. I took a long nap. When I woke up I…I was glued to other pencils hanging on a wall. It was very weird. All the other pencils were almost as small as me. I asked the pencil next me and what we were hanging on the wall for and she said we are on the “Look how many pencils we used up so far” wall. “That explains it.” I answered. So my life will live much longer than it would if I was thrown away. But how much longer will I last?

My School Science Fair

Ahhh! 2 days ago I handed in my science fair project and I won’t know if I won until Tuesday. The judges aren’t judging them until Monday after school. I just want to know if I won or my sister won. It would be awesome if my sister and I both won. I won last year so I wouldn’t mind if my sister and I didn’t win or just if my sister won. But, this year if we win we go to another science fair and if we win that there is another science fair in Washington! So one science fair can lead to another science fair that can lead to another science fair!

The New Girl in the School

Chapter 1

Once there was a little girl named Elizabeth. She just moved to New Jersey from Mississippi. She doesn’t know anyone. This is her first time moving and she just turned 10. So before school when she was waiting for the bus kids were talking to her to try and get to know her, but she didn’t listen.
So when she got to school a girl named Liz came up to her. “Hi. My name is Liz. Are you new?” Elizabeth just nodded. “I’m new here too. I am from Mississippi. Where are you from?” Liz asked. “Mississippi.” Elizabeth answered. “You talk! My friend said you never talked!” Elizabeth just walked away. Liz never saw Elizabeth the rest of the morning. Then, at lunch she saw her sitting alone at a table.
When Liz got to the table Elizabeth said “Can I please be alone right now?” So Liz just walked away. Then, Liz never saw Elizabeth for the rest of the day.

The Secret Person

There is a little girl named Sarah. She is 11 years old. She also has no brother or sister. She lived with her mom and dad. She moved into her vast house about 1 year ago and she still never saw half of it. It was that big. It was a Saturday afternoon and she heard a voice going from the part of house she never saw. Her dad was a work and her mom was next door babysitting a baby named Joey. So it couldn’t be either of them.
“Where could it be?”Sarah heard. The voice sounded like someone she knew's voice. She thought and thought about who it could be, but no one was in mind. She wanted to see who it was but she didn’t know what could be on that side of her house. “Nothing weird,” she said to herself. So she went over to the closest hallway. And she heard the voice down that hallway! She looked in each room and saw no one in the rooms. When she got to the last door on the hallway she saw someone look thought the stuff in that room.
“Who are you?”Sarah asked. “It is just me Sarah.” the voice answered. Now, the voice sounded more like her moms. But it had a little higher pitch. “Mom is that you?” “Yes.” The voice answered. Sarah was so happy that it she wasn't a stranger. “Why aren’t you with Joey?” Sarah said. “Joey’s mom came home early because her boss thought she was working to hard. I am her because I am looking for my yoga mat.” she answered. ”It is right over there.” Sarah told her mom.
The End

One Sad Day

Ray Jackson was the greatest race car driver in his neighborhood. His very best friend is the leader of his pit crew: a good natured pony named Sam. Rocky and Sam won 17 races together.
The problem was the success was going to Ray’s head. He started to think that he was such a powerful superhero that he didn’t need Sam’s help anymore. This made Sam feel sad. Finally, Sam got so fed up he told Ray he couldn’t tie his shoes anymore. When it was time for the next race, Ray was confident that he could win the race without Sam. The starting buzzer sounded, and Ray took off with a big thump! By the final lap, he was far ahead of the other drivers. Suddenly, Ray heard a big exploding noise, and his racecar flipped over and came to a halt. He got out and saw that his front tire had come loose! Without Sam around to fix it, Ray had to resort to phoning his mom. All of the other cars whooshed past him, and he finished in dead last!
After the race Ray told Sam that he was the pit crew helper ever. They went back to being best friends… not to mention race car champions.
[from webkinz creations]

The Charm Forest

Once upon a time, deep in the Charm Forest, there lived a good fairy named Katie. She made her home inside of an old tree trunk, and she could talk to all of the plants in the forests. The plants were her best friends.
But one day, the forest was suddenly silent. Katie sang for two whole hours, but none of the plants answered her. Then she realized that the leaves on the trees were turning purple and there was a thin layer of frost on the ground. The plants were so quiet because the winter was coming!
Katie tried to get used to her friends not being around, but she was just so grumpy without them. So she decided to cast a spell. Picking up her star dust and reading from the Newspaper, Katie spread a group of pixies throughout the entire forest. All of a sudden, the forest disappeared, and the plants sprung back to life! They all said a big Hooray! to Katie.
And ever since then, no matter what time of year it is, the Charm Forest was always green and blooming.
[from webkinz creations]

My happy day

One day I was just learning and then the teacher just called me up to her desk. I didn’t know what she was calling me up for. She was just really going to tell me about a writing I wrote. It was my life time order essay. She thought it was really good. She even told me it was the best one in the class! I was the only one to get a 5 in the class. She even read it to the whole class! I was so surprised that she thought it was so good because I didn’t think it was that great. That brightened up my day. So I was really happy that day.

The Secret Key

Once there was a little girl named Liz. She was as small as an ironing board. So one day she was just walking down the sidewalk like a nice little girl and she found a key on the ground. So when she was about to pick it up to show her parents it was gone! It was gone in a flash. She ran home to get her parents. “One second a key was on the ground and the next it was gone!” she said in her small voice. Her parents asked her if anyone was nearby when it happened. The answer was yes. But when she was back outside no one was in sight. Then she thought she had no chance but to run around looking for that person.

“I remember what he looked like,” she told her parents. “Did you ever think that it was his key?” her mom asked. “No because I saw his keys in his pocket.” Liz answered. No one talked for two to five minutes. Liz told her mom that she was going to look for the man.

After she walked two block she saw the man! She ran the man and told him, “ Does that key belong to you? Because I see your keys in your pocket.” “No they don’t belong to me but they do belong to my wife,” he answered. “Sorry for all of the trouble I caused you,” she said. Then she walked away. “At least I solved that problem,” she said as she walked away.

The End