Sunday, February 8, 2009

The New Girl in the School

Chapter 1

Once there was a little girl named Elizabeth. She just moved to New Jersey from Mississippi. She doesn’t know anyone. This is her first time moving and she just turned 10. So before school when she was waiting for the bus kids were talking to her to try and get to know her, but she didn’t listen.
So when she got to school a girl named Liz came up to her. “Hi. My name is Liz. Are you new?” Elizabeth just nodded. “I’m new here too. I am from Mississippi. Where are you from?” Liz asked. “Mississippi.” Elizabeth answered. “You talk! My friend said you never talked!” Elizabeth just walked away. Liz never saw Elizabeth the rest of the morning. Then, at lunch she saw her sitting alone at a table.
When Liz got to the table Elizabeth said “Can I please be alone right now?” So Liz just walked away. Then, Liz never saw Elizabeth for the rest of the day.

6 comments:

  1. I can't wait to read what happens next! Will Liz and Elizabeth become friends? They have so much in common. Keep writing! <3 Mom

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  2. I like this story so far. from S.H. :)

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  3. What does TNGITS mean? From S.H. :)

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  4. I wonder why Elizabeth won't talk to people when they are trying to be friendly? I'm anxious to find out! Looking forward to Chapter 2. N.

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  5. I'd like to read chapter 2 also....anytime soon???

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