Wednesday, January 28, 2009

The Scary Castle

Once there was a little girl who saw a king-sized castle. Her name is Beth. She wanted to know what was inside. So she went inside. There were skeletons hanging everywhere. She tip-toed down the long hallway.


“Grr!” Beth heard. The sound came from down a hallway. When she got to a door she saw fire! She was very brave so she went inside the door and saw nothing! There was a huge door on the other side of the room. The door was almost burnt to a crisp!


“Grr!” she heard again. This time she was closer to the sound. She always had her journal with her so she wrote what the sound could be coming from. Her scariest idea was a dragon! She thought about it for a few minutes.


“Wow!”Beth said. She said wow because she opened the door a little and she saw a big eye! So she crossed out all of the small animals. The only thing left on the list was…a dragon! She opened the door the rest of the way. When she did she saw a real…dragon! She ran for her life out of the door. The dragon ran after her!


When she was out of the castle she locked the vast door shut. Finally she was safe.


The End

12 comments:

  1. Wow, Breezee! That was a lot of excitement in one short story! I'm glad it had a happy ending. :-)

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  2. Great job, Bree! Awesome detail and descriptions! =)

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  3. I liked it and hhhiiiiii from Shannon

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  4. This is a good story! I like it. From Shannon =0 =) :]

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  5. hi anonymous and thx for telling me that i this was a great story. breezee

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  6. nice story. and a HAPPY ENDING. FROM S.H.

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  7. yea S.H./Anonymous. thx for not using ur real name. breezee

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  8. That is such a good story, Bree! I can not wait 2 see u again!!

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  9. i can not wait to see u again too Katie!

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  10. I think the animal should have been a cute little puppy that was really hngry.

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