The Nice Mummie

Once there was a nice mummy wondering the streets close to a graveyard. He had no idea where he was so to went up to a door and rang what he thought was a toy but really was a door bell and kept ringing it non-stop and he liked it. Until a woman answered a door with a stick and she looked pretty mad. Her face was turning dark red. The mummy knew what she was about to do so he ran across the street and did the same but, with a man but, the man wasn’t mad. He was actually pretty cool about it. He was fine with it because he was a little boy who loved mummies and always wanted one! So the boy took him inside told his mom and dad about how they meet and his parents said that he could keep him until they can find where he came from. They forgot about the graveyard and started putting flyers up about a found mummy.
When people saw the posters they came to their house to meet the mummy. Everyone was so interested. Then one day the guy that waters the flowers that people leave at the graveyard came to the house and said that there was a missing person. Then he thought about it and figured out that it was the mummy.
So the next day the mummy had to go back to where he belonged. He was very nice about the whole thing. He said good-bye to all of the neighbors and the family that let him stay at their house and said hello to the graveyard. After that day no one saw the nice mummy ever again.

I need your help!!!!!

Hello all! I have a question for you! Do you think I should get help from my brother to write more of my story that I already have 2 chapters of? Or do you think I should start writing a different story? If I start a new story I will make it long and only 1 chapter, so it wouldn’t even be a chapter. I am think of doing the long thing but, I some of my body is telling me to get my brothers help. So instead of asking my family because I know what they would say I am asking you. I am counting on you. I will tell you the answer after I look at all of my comments and see if I want to have to think really hard about what to write or to get all of my brothers ideas and change it up a little. I need your help. Please help me decide. Tell me my commenting on this.

Breezee is back!

Sorry I haven’t written in a while my summer has was crazy (with watching T.V. so much lol)! Now that I am back at school and do writers workshop everyday. I will be writing a lot more to practice. I will try and do one story a week but, that might not work out as well as I am hoping because now I my week is packed! So I will post as much as I can. Post you soon!